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Tick - From Papa Possum - For Countdown Day

Posted by Eudaimonia 8 years, 3 months ago to Politics
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January’s satire, “Tick,” for Countdown Day.
Enjoy, or not.

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Tick
Three sixty-five...

We will count down ev'ry hour
and we'll mark off ev'ry day
'til your marxist reign is over,
'til, at last, you're dragged away
to the cheering of the People,
to our deafening, “Hurray,”
'til your High Noon we call our
Second Independence Day.

A year is all that's left to you,
in days – three sixty-six.
Ev'ry hour, minute, second
ev'ry eye will now affix
to a timepiece that's convenient,
any calendar or clock,
to see how long we must play Hobbes
instead of playing Locke.

We will count down ev'ry hour
and we'll mark off ev'ry day
'til your marxist reign is over,
'til, at last, you're dragged away
to our swelling songs of Liberty,
to fireworks display,
'til your High Noon we call our
Second Independence Day

One last year for your treacheries
each a reminder how
if not for cowardly Congress,
you'd be impeached right now.
One last year for your legacy
of rack and ruin and coup.
One last year for your villainy...
'til last we're free of you.

We will count down ev'ry hour
and we'll mark off ev'ry day
'til your marxist reign is over,
'til, at last, you're dragged away
to feasts of friends and families,
to toast and repartee,
'til your High Noon we call our
Second Independence Day

To the cheering of the People,
to our deafening, “Hurray!”
to our swelling songs of Liberty,
to fireworks display,
to feasts of friends and families,
to toast and repartee,
come your High Noon we call our
Second Independence Day


Tick, Copyright © 2016 Papa Possum

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Hear the audio stream here: http://papapossum.blogspot.com/2016/0...


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  • Posted by $ MichaelAarethun 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    By extension that should apply to all those left thinking candidates which leaves......None of the Above
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  • Posted by Herb7734 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    That's why my prognostications end in question marks.
    I do love Papa P. though and look forward to their appearances.
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  • Posted by 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    You're not the first person to notice that. Even though it was not my intention, feel free to make the association.

    Thanks for reading.
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  • Posted by 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    I'm pretty fair at rhyming stuff. Prognostication is not a talent I claim.

    Thanks for reading, and as always, thanks for the response in verse.
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  • Posted by 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    Most of my work is written in Ballad form. The form lends itself well to song, especially when sections are repeated.

    I don't write with a specific tune in mind. My main concern is that rhythm and cadence are correct. One of the reasons that I started providing audio for each piece was so that the rhythm and cadence were made plain, particularly in parts some might find troublesome.

    Thanks for reading.
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  • Posted by $ allosaur 8 years, 3 months ago in reply to this comment.
    That would not keep a Billary or a Bernie out of the White House.
    But faced with a front-running Sir Jeb of the Royal House of Bush,who I of late have begun to call "Grasshopper Eyes" when I see his weird stare on TV, I'd be repulsed enough to vote for Johnson.
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  • Posted by Herb7734 8 years, 3 months ago
    Oh, Papa Possum tell me with your knowledge vast,
    Our 2nd independence, can it ever last?
    With candidates from a low budget horror film's cast,
    Can it be our years of glory are only in the past?
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  • Posted by $ jdg 8 years, 3 months ago
    It's a good double entendre, too! 0 deserves to be remembered as a tiny, blood-sucking insect!
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  • Posted by ycandrea 8 years, 3 months ago
    This is great. It should be the National Anthem of the Gulch! May I share this?
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  • Posted by $ Maree 8 years, 3 months ago
    Good work Eud
    I agree with Jan about setting it to music.
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