I started to write a letter to send to my representatives and senators about what I would like to see to them. My intent is to have it be fairly strongly worded.

I was wondering if others here would take a look at it and provide their feedback. It needs to be concise enough that someone will read it but long enough to cover a few major points.

As it evolves I will update it on this thread, and anyone my use it, in whole or in part for there own letters to there representatives..