found it -- 1969 prequel of Every Breath You Take
as previously hinted, 14 years before Sting:::
I Am Watching...
Lover, I am watching you,
for I want to know all of you:
from your smile,
but it's not your smile:
it's a silver-blue sparkle
from behind your eyes,
or two smooth curves,
rising, across your cheeks,
or the curve of your mouth,
bending up, to linear and beyond;
from your body,
but it's not your body:
it's a silver-gold-tan blur of motion,
begun by silver and tan,
by the light behind your eyes,
followed by the drifting-gold afterglow
of your hair streaming after,
or the taut lines of your arms,
converging at that point behind your eyes,
now closed and looking inward,
striving to find the source of that lifelight
of a moment of ecstasy,
and the rising and falling of your breasts,
velvet-textured in the moonlight,
moving in time with your search for the source
and slowing,
as the search ends and the source is known;
these and more, ever more,
whose sum is you,
are the beauties I know as I watch;
I see myself, smiling your smile,
from within me,
moving through the day with you,
slightly ahead, then slightly behind,
then breathing my breaths,
that you may work to breathe yours
while making mine seem impossible to find;
in these ways each of us moves into the other's life;
we learn one another as we learn ourselves,
gaining an added dimension
by reflection, each in the other,
as we live,
alone,
together,
and watching... jpm.28dec69, alone.
I Am Watching...
Lover, I am watching you,
for I want to know all of you:
from your smile,
but it's not your smile:
it's a silver-blue sparkle
from behind your eyes,
or two smooth curves,
rising, across your cheeks,
or the curve of your mouth,
bending up, to linear and beyond;
from your body,
but it's not your body:
it's a silver-gold-tan blur of motion,
begun by silver and tan,
by the light behind your eyes,
followed by the drifting-gold afterglow
of your hair streaming after,
or the taut lines of your arms,
converging at that point behind your eyes,
now closed and looking inward,
striving to find the source of that lifelight
of a moment of ecstasy,
and the rising and falling of your breasts,
velvet-textured in the moonlight,
moving in time with your search for the source
and slowing,
as the search ends and the source is known;
these and more, ever more,
whose sum is you,
are the beauties I know as I watch;
I see myself, smiling your smile,
from within me,
moving through the day with you,
slightly ahead, then slightly behind,
then breathing my breaths,
that you may work to breathe yours
while making mine seem impossible to find;
in these ways each of us moves into the other's life;
we learn one another as we learn ourselves,
gaining an added dimension
by reflection, each in the other,
as we live,
alone,
together,
and watching... jpm.28dec69, alone.
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I think we are aging ourselves...So what :)
A classic, timeless beauty.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCsVXdxBW...
this one, too::: -- j
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tIKOtedB...
wearing handicapped tags these days, but we
do hope to go out together, if ... well, it's almost
like the old song:::
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lRWXHom...
or, well, live for this week, this month, this year..... -- j
nature of a man and a woman together, well --
John Wayne said it well in McLintock ....... "all the
gold in the u.s. treasury, and all the harp music in
heaven, can't equal what happens between a man
and a woman, with all that growin' together." -- j
p.s. this is found at 1:17 in this youtube::: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rff9RELy...
one another. second and current (17 years together)
wife and I hold hands 'til ... -- j
p.s. corny? nope!
"What a piece of work is a man, how noble in reason, how
infinite in faculties, in form and moving how express and
admirable, in action how like an angel, in apprehension how like
a god!" Shakespeare.
Regards,
O.A.
A look with a smile, a head on someone's shoulder, "goodnight sweetie." Is it corny and yokel-like? Probably. Just call me Rustic Rufus..
there is beauty ... just the caress of a hand can be
gorgeous ... and we should focus on it more! -- j
which I will eventually find, here in the "stacks" --
if you remember how they used to call the back
rooms at the library....... -- j
Is capable of creating such beauty in all the arts. Even their buildings and vehicles strive for beauty. They are a puzzle within an enigma. They have the power to reason, they have volition, and yet billions of them prefer horror to beauty, war to peace, irrationality to reason.
They are magnificent and malevolent. If you can read the above and not be touched, there is something missing within.
In the words of the King of Siam, "'Tis a puzzlement."
So many lumps in my throat, you'd think I had a goiter.
the indented version is in the "general" section,
entitled "Watching..." -- j
I'm very old, but I gotta say, reading that...well, I'm going to have a conversation with the wife. After 59 years together, we still make that trip that lovers write about as above. Is it hot in here?
"It's not a bug, it's a feature!"
by having found it, I guess. -- j
and fixed the indents with a trick. -- j
world of lovemaking ... and 20 months before
I was married the first time. odd, but the memories
have not faded about those days -- very special. -- j
in the original, starting with "but it's not your smile" ...
this thing forgot my indents. -- j